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is this a good opening paragraph for a persuasive essay on smoking public?

What are your thoughts on smoking in public? Many argued that smoking should be banned in public places for reasons of health, but what about other reasons like the fact that children are exposed to this dangerous habit, and even the litter? Smoking affects everything and everyone around, not just the smoker. Do you agree that people should not have to be subjected to such horrific consequences, just because someone wants to smoke? feel free to add anything whether and revise. thank you:) asking for a strategy of persuasion. is a rhetorical question. but what if I took the "do not you think that "in the last sentence to make it say" people should not be subjected to such horrific consequences, just because someone wants smoking. "

Okay, that's really good, but do not stop and start with a question. made all kinds, and if testing obtained in all cases them.but it's really good just not start or end with questions.You can make for the start, "Smoking in public can be a very dangerous thing for people to smoke and people around them ".]

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